Half A Stanza To Surprise The Established Confucian Scholar
The military strategist who was bad at poetry introduced his student. âXu Cijiu, my student who excels in the art of war. He is a promising scholar.â
Zhang Zhen kept his surprise to himself.
âYouâre not a poet, why have you volunteered yourself?â
Zhu Tuizi had thought the purple jade belonged to him when a student called out. Warily, he sized up the competition. However, when he saw that it was Xu Xinnian, his confidence rose again.
Zhu Tuizi only spared Xu Xinnian a glance.
They were classmates for years. Although they rarely interacted, they were aware of each otherâs strengths and weaknesses.
Xu Xinnian was skilled in composing essays that discussed contemporary affairs, he also had a good grasp of military strategies. Poetry was not his strong suit.
The jade accessory was Zhu Tuiziâs.
All eyes fell on Xu Xinnian as he basked in the attention. His eyes were far away, staring into the soft glow of the sun.
âThousand miles of yellow clouds darken the day.â
The national chess player, Li Baimu, stroked his white beard. The simple sentence was meant to set the scene but the words resonated in his chest.
âThe north wind stirs the geese and snow.â
It was almost winter. While snowfall had not begun, it was only a matter of time before the weather changed. There was no hyperbole in that sentence.
The imagery appeared in everyoneâs mind. The setting sun was blocked by a flurry of snow as the north wind roaredâthe sky was dotted with flying geese.
The two sentences painted an image befitting a farewell.
Zhang Zhen was surprised. In his many years of observing Xu Xinnian, the student showed little aptitude for poetry. These two seven-character sentences must have taken a lot of effort. If the whole poem was of this quality, Xu Xinnian might outperform Zhu Tuizi.
Among the three established Confucian scholars, Ziyangâs Layman was the most skilled in the art of poetry. He ruminated on the words and felt sorrow in his heart.
A thousand miles, the sunset, the north wind, the flying geese, the flurry of snow⊠The setting was one of loneliness and desolation.
The poem sounded as if he was being banished, not promotedâand yet there was a certain charm in its sorrow.
His past achievements were acknowledged by the courts, therefore he was assigned to Qingzhou. However, would the powers of the Imperial College allow him to grow and prosper in the courts?
Would they stand by and watch as he built a foundation in the courts for the White Deer Academy?
An unknown fate awaited him in Qingzhouâthe path ahead was uncertain.
Then, Xu Xinnian spread his arms apart. His handsome face glowed under the warm rays of the sun, unmarred and delicate.
With his arms wide open, he looked at Ziyangâs Layman and recited loudly.
âFear not a journey of loneliness, for you are not a stranger to the realm.â
A hush fell over the pavilion and its surroundings.
A chill swept through the audience.
Zhu Tuiziâs head turned stiffly to look at the erect Xu Xinnian.
âFear not a journey of loneliness, for you are not a stranger to the realm.âLi Mubai applauded loudly. âExceptional!â
The first two sentences evoked sadness, then the last two sentences changed the mood and lifted everyoneâs hearts and spirits.
Zhang Zhen kept his eyes on Xu Xinnian.
Ziyangâs Layman was still caught up in the beauty of the poem, his heart was moved.
âA good one, really impressive,â he mumbled.
The military strategist saw that his student did not continue his recital and asked, âWhat about the next half?â
A smirk tugged at Xu Xinnianâs lips as he replied, âThe poem exists in only half a stanza.â
Only half a stanza?
The scholars were wide-eyed at the statement. This man performed a half-written poem?
âNo matter, no matter. Half a stanza was sufficiently impressive,â Ziyangâs Layman said calmly. He wore a cheery smile as he asked, âXu Cijiu, does this poem have a name?â
âNo!â
Xu Xinnian maintained his proud demeanor in hopes to avoid their questions. His reluctance to elaborate would discourage further questions.
The smile on Ziyangâs Laymanâs face widened. âNo rush. This poem was meant for my farewell, right?â
Xu Xinnian nodded.
âWhy donât I name it for you?â
Li Mubai and Zhang Zhen realized what he was doing and frowned as if they both tasted a lemon slice.
âHow about âYang Gongâs Farewell To Qingzhou At The Sheepâs Pavilionâ?â The elder looked expectantly at Xu Xinnian.
âSatisfactory!â Xu Xinnian called out. Noticing his lack of respect, he added. âAs you please.â
The two elders beside Ziyangâs Layman made sounds of disapproval.
âShameless thief.â
âTsk!â
âIt is fate.â Ziyangâs Layman laughed heartily as he bowed at them with his hands folded.
In an era where poetry was a dying art, this poem would be revolutionary. It would be sung by every student and scholar of the realm.
The name of Ziyangâs Layman was bound to the poemâs title, and thus would be known throughout the lands.
If the poem survived the ages, his name would also be passed down generations and generations.
The quality of the poem made it highly likely to be well-received by all.
The two elders had called him shameless because Xu Xinnian was presenting this poem as a gift to a mentor. Technically, a courtesy name or art name should be used instead of a given name in the poem title. A given name should only be used in poems about oneâs peers and close friends.
Evidently, the man was too caught up with fame to feel the shame.
What was every scholarâs dream? To cultivate oneself and bring peace to the empire? No, that was an ideal.
Throughout the ages, every scholarâs biggest dream was to have their name carved into history.
The two elders were incredibly jealous.
As Xu Xinnianâs mentor, Zhang Zhen had some doubts about the author of the poem but he stayed silent. He was happy for his student to receive praise from Ziyangâs Layman.
As the three elders discussed, Xu Xinnian coughed to get their attention. âRespectfully, I must declare that the poem is not my work.â
The discussion stopped.
The three esteemed scholars wore different expressionsâsurprise, shock and understanding.
Li Mubai was surprised.
Ziyangâs Layman had the largest reaction. He took two steps forward and asked, âWho is the author? Is he from our academy? Is he here?â
He looked past Xu Xinnian as he scanned the crowd.
Xu Xinnian lifted his chin and said proudly, âIt is my elder brother.â
A chatter began among the student body.
âXu Cijiuâs brother?â
âWhere does he study? Iâve never heard of him.â
âIf I remembered correctly, Xu Cijiu is the eldest of his family.â
âCijiu, what is your brotherâs name? Who is his mentor? Tell us. A poet of this caliber yet unknown to the academy?â
The students were eager to hear about this mysterious poet.
The three elders watched Xu Xinnian.
âAh crap, Iâve been badly influenced by my fatherâs impulsiveness. I shouldnât have revealed the existence of my impulsive brother.â The eagerness in the studentsâ eyes made Xu Xinnian rethink his decision.
To be a scholar was to be the top of society, as shown by the haughty Xu Xinnian.
Those from the White Deer Academy were no exceptions.
If Xu Qian was a scholar, these people would sing praises and laudation. Revealing the poet was a constable would give rise to a negative reaction.
If a lowly constable could write such an exemplary seven-character poem, what of the scholars?
Xu Xinnian pushed through with his explanation. âMy brother⊠He studies the scriptures at home and doesnât attend the White Deer Academy or the Imperial College. He is a simple man who doesnât want fame and prefers to be left alone to his works.â
Such dedication was praiseworthy. The White Deer Academy students were pleasantly surprised as a gush of friendship filled their hearts.
Unsurprisingly, the purple jade was presented to Xu Xinnian. Ziyangâs Layman bid the crowd farewell. In a burst of inspiration, he left them with a line before he entered the decorated carriage.
âTalents cannot be covered in dust, speak carefully in such times of peace. What do you say?â
The two other elders gave no response. Perhaps they understood but pretended not to. The crowd watched as the carriage ferried Ziyangâs Layman away. After some time, Li Mubai tapped Xu Xinnian on the arm. The two men stepped aside to have a private conversation. âCijiu, I suddenly have the urge to take in a disciple. If you are free today, can you introduce me to your brother?â
Zhang Zhen appeared and quickly said, âCijiu, wouldnât it be great if you and your brother were under my tutelage?â
It did not matter if the man wrote any more poems. The main goal was not to let the talent be buried.
Perhaps the future had a famous poem titled, âMy Mentor, Zhang Zhenâ.
Li Mubai argued, âMilitary strategy is not the main branch of study. Every scholar has to start with the scriptures, essay composition and self-cultivation.â
âOh? And chess is a main branch? A mentor who canât take a loss and has never won against Wei Yuan?â Zhang Zhen taunted.
âShut your mouth, you old thief. Donât mention Wei Yuan in my presence. I have always cherished my talents, this student is mine.â
âYou old fool, you just want him for his poetry skills.â
âShameless! Watch me strike you down with my noble spirit.â
âAs if I canât do the same.â
Xu Xinnianâs head was heavy.
The students who stood a distance away were in shock. The two established Confucian scholars were red-faced as they arguedâit looked as if a fight was about to break out.
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