Hey loyal soldiers of the Empire,
I just finished editing Book 1, but there are still a few things Iām not entirely happy with, and Iād love to hear your thoughts.
First, the
ending of the first book
āwhile Iāve planned out the overall story, I never decided exactly where each book should end. Right now, Iām torn between
Chapter 81
and
Chapter 117
as the stopping point for Book 1.
Second, Iām still
not completely happy with the starting classes
the MC can choose in Chapter 3. I recently realized that theyāre almost identical to the ones Jake can pick in
The Primal Hunter
. That wasnāt intentionalāI just wanted to use the most basic combat classes that advanced ones could evolve from. Iām not sure if this is a problem, but Iād still like to tweak them a bit. If you have any ideas for alternative starter classes, feel free to share!
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Once these two points are sorted, Iāll be sending the book off for
professional editing
. If you have any other suggestions for improvements, please let me know! You can also send me a private message if youād rather not post in the commentsāI usually respond pretty quickly.
One more thing:
Aethon is giving us a new cover!
If you have any cool ideas for an image or a scene that would look great on it, drop them in the comments!
Oh, and since I asked before but want to bring it up againā
weāre also getting an audiobook!
If thereās a narrator youād love to hear for this book, let me know. I already have a list from the last time I asked, but I want to make sure we get someone who really
tells the story
rather than just yelling the whole time.
Thatās all for now. Thanks for your help, and see you tomorrow with the next chappie!
Cheers!